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my ears hurt. ah, turn down that "neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" sound. it friggin kills your ears, how did YOU listen to it??1?1/1/1/1//1!?/1!? man, okay. well, it was alright, except for the NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE part, also, make more variation, stop using the same friggin thing looped over and over for a really long time, its not good. well, you're good with climaxes i guess, nice second pattern, the "low-high-low-high" one. well, the song wasnt the best, it was near the worst. dont make the sounds too loud, and stop it with the repeating. good luck! =)
i sucked too, lol, look at my stuff, even review if you want, but yea, i still suck i guess, lol.