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i liked it.

but you have to make some/all of the sounds alot quieter, they sort of mess up the song. but good song nonetheless. =)

good song.

But i dont like the fact that you cant really LISTEN to it on newgrounds, lol. Well, the beginning is alright, make it more "catchy" or as many say, more "hypnotizing". but its got a nice bassline and melodies, and random crashes. All-in-all, nice try at trance, but do something with the "realistic-ish" drumloops, dont just throw them in to finish the song faster/easier. Instead, make your own drum loops that are "dancy", but just not so....real. It doesnt fit with trance, it all has to blend in.

=/ k, good try.

hey.

hey, nice song. i like the bassline as well. But i have a complaint, the beginning almost seems......overloaded with drum loops. At least before the actual song begins, if you know what i mean. but its still a good song, just dont like the beginning too much, im not saying its bad, just not right. oh, and the ....not-elements drumloop doesnt sound right at the end of its loop with the rest of the song. But good nonetheless.

whatever dude.

whatever dude, you know its good, and so does everyone else, lol. but i have a question, how do you make the techno sound so...fast? i tried it myself in FL studio, i didnt get it, lol. tell me plz.

sweet song man.

lol, except the random voices i just heard :P but i guess that adds to diversity.

Well, it was an awesome song, and that will make this very review short.

K, lol, personally i like hearing it on newgrounds audio instead of on iTunes, i guess its because the sound is "unclean" on newgrounds audio, lol, awesome song though, very energizing, and that kind of stuff isnt very easy to do. You've got some talent, keep it up, and...i hope you actually read this review, lol. well, you're better than me! so thats good! lol, whatever man, nice music.

Psybot responds:

Thx for reviewing my music:D

I a read every review as it was my first review.
because its not me who decides if my music is good or not. and i have to do it to learn something from my mistakes.
whatever...

thx for your review =D

lol, i just put whatever numbers.

Heyya, im happy you're making christian music =D =D =D =D =D nice lyrics too! but it'd sound better if you had an echo on your voice, or the singer, whatever, because the instruments themselves have echoes, so yea, add echoes, lol, nice job, see ya!

Hm.....nice review other guy.

lol, well. I dont like this song either, but its not "RUBBISH", it's got potential, like, for one, i like the random instruments put into it, but it'd be alot awesomer if you got transitions inbetween, like first its drums then they play really really fast meanwhile getting quieter until muted and while that happens, the piano kicks in the same way, getting louder and louder from mute until it's at a good volume, you've got potential...listen to my songs!!! lol, review please! but yea, listen to them, most should have "transitions", you just gotta have a melody to your songs man, like a story of some sort or something but in a musical way. Like a slowly pitch-decreasing "Duhn!"(lol, i cant TYPE good sounds/instruments/noises), but yea, i like this one, just work on it and later on when you're really good, make a new newgrounds name for yourself(literally) and show people that you are the best. k, see ya later dude. well, smell, well actually...whatever, lol. later.

OMF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY FART! THIS IS SOOO GOOD, LOL, AHHHHHHH, CANT TAKE CAPS LOCK OFF, TOO GOOD. Seriously though man, you've already blown me away with your songs. I'm glad I discovered you on this website, you truly are good if you just started submitting so friggin' early!!!! Man, good job.

BTW, what program DO YOU USE? :D

Hey.

Not the best, and would've been ALOT better had you just used a different filter and none of those freakishly scratchy noises sOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! Would've better if you'd fix your drums and how they beat, they're all off-beat sometimes and just sound choppy. You're obviously better than me though, i mean, i've only been making techno for about as long as you have but you are just better, its obvious!!!! :(

I like it.

I dont think Zydar is ABSOLUTELY THE BEST!!!, but he's definitely improving, and one day he WILL be the best, if he chooses to be. But i like how this song flows, and the effects make it better. Keep it UP, .......yay! punctuation error! yay!

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